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Round 3

The world around us is the ultimate source of inspiration. There is ever an abundance of material for the writer to glean. Please respond to one of the following with a poem.
  • Listen to a piece of instrumental music (no lyrics) and write a poem based on what you think the music is about or where it takes you. The music could be rock, jazz, classical, world, etc.

  • Look at a newspaper and use its contents-any or all of it, including stories, ads, layout, personals, classifieds, etc.-as your source of inspiration for a poem.

  • Ask an older person to tell you a story about his or her life. You might ask them to tell you about the time when they were your age. Or you might want them to tell you about something quite specific. Write a poem based on what they tell you.

Portal

Ground yourself
Free fall like a warm snow flake
Toward the sky,
Heavens awake
Erotically pure
Let yourself be drummed
Pulse with guitar strings
Orgasm
Prism vibration
Soul playground
Festive carnival mind
Utopia,
Blend, vaporize
Dimension appear
anyone with concert tickets
This plane departs,

One step deep

-Angie Poynter, Taos High School
(Rating: 8.80) Read Reviews of this Poem


Reoccuring Nightmare

My eyes scan over the small black print.
The letters alone devoid of meaning,
Yet together they engulf me with sorrow.
A neighborhood is struck
With the reality of death.
As children amuse themselves
Playing hopscotch in the street,
Near fallen debris and crime scene tape.
Nearby flames devour homes filled with pictures,
Vivid memories of a better time.
The sky, viewed as a hazard
Inflicts fear on those below.
I see myself in their place,
My eyes swollen, plagued with names of lost lives,
People who hold a place in our hearts.
The crash of United Airlines 587
Came at a time when our country is already torn,
Leaving us to pick up the pieces once again,
Like an officer on the blackened streets of New York
Thankful he lives on.



From The Alburquerque Journal

-Jamie Ross, Onate High School
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Sacrafice

Hearing so dim now because of the
Deafening call from the past.
Such hearing now lost thanks to the vision
Of the future you would save.
That call of war which deafens all minds,
Blurs the present to see only what lies ahead.
The sacrifice you gave us then
Only for a future you could not guess.
You gave your youth, you gave your mind
Off to war simply for other’s lives.
That sacrifice you can never get back,
Remembered when you look upon our flag.
That flag you fought for,
The truths for which it stands;
You remember it daily,
But what of the common man?
Yes that ordinary person living on
The 48th street you fought to save;
How often do they think of your sacrifices
For this, the land of the brave?

Only two of three hundred and sixty-five days.

-Charles James, Las Cruces High School
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Beyond the Horizon

From where I stand
I can feel the mist of the Congo jungle,
and can hear the beating
of the Ngombis and the Kelelis.
So moving.

Then taken to the heart of India
where the sound of the Sarangi
and the Sruti-peti makes my heart race,
and where I can taste the dense humid curry air.
So exotic.

Then taken far across to the Orient,
where I can hear the Sakuhachi and the Qin,
and smell a hint of ginger.
So mystical.

Then west to the land of Arabia
where I can hear the sound of the Durbekeh,
while the smell of allspice tickles my nose.
So amazing.

Overwhelmed by their music and culture
that is so rich, lively, and tasteful
as if mocking our dull and bland one.

Wonderful and magical things lie beyond the horizon.


-Shareen, Santa Fe Preparatory School
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Old Days

"Back in the old days," my grandma used to say we had no bills to pay like we do today. We lived in homes made out of mud and sticks that we had to hand mix. We didn't drive around in fancy automobiles. Instead we had to listen to the wagon wheels. Grandma's never worn high heels, but had to wear moccasins until her feet peel. We had no public schools or boarding schools. Instead we made fancy jewelry with hand made tools sitting on hard wooden chairs enjoying the fresh air . . . That was how we lived in the "old days," she used to say.

-Leatrice Whitegoat, Ft. Wingate Bia School
(Rating: 8.00) Read Reviews of this Poem


Omnipotent Love

Her love is comforting deep in my soul,
Her life is a novel, never been sold.

Her eyes a shade of green-blue,
As if reflecting the ocean's gorgeous hue.

Her house reeking of raisin bread,
Those memories I keep in my head.

Her voice a soft whisper touching my heart,
Her wit was fantastic, she was so smart.

Her grace was beautiful as if gliding along,
She had the best way of never being wrong.

Her stories calmed me as I fell to sleep,
Now I see her obituary and I begin to weep.

I miss her so much, yet I knew she had to go,
I miss her touch within every dress she'd sew.

My grandmother was more than you could ever want to know,
She touched my heart and taught me how to love, and for that she is my hero.



-Kesha Lynette Flint, San Jon High School
(Rating: 7.50) Read Reviews of this Poem


Radtzky March

Purple ribbon winding,
Bringing dusky twilight.
Angel of black, spreading wings.
Mists rising on a soft blue plain,
Darts of red and orange,
As of firebirds.
Reality dancing on satin slippers.
Twisting ribbons of green.
Swaying of a plain,
Gently becoming the rythmatic rippling of a lake.
Twinking stars,
Unobscured by atmosphere.
Time marching upon existence.
Petty squabbles of reality and fantasy obsolete.
Dark ribbon, flush away color and meaning.
A plain of nothing.
Darkness.
And an angel.

-Kira Lueth, Socorro High School
(Rating: 7.50) Read Reviews of this Poem


I'm free

As the music plays
the rhythm of her instrument
allows my lyrics to take me away.
So far, forever, run and don't stop.
FREEDOM
are the words.
I stand on the highest waterfall,
so loud my words are,
FREEDOM
then jump off.
Fly free so free.
Into the ocean
in despair I dip
swim fast or slow, back and forth,
swim free so free.
The tallest mountain is now in my soul
wind accompanies me
yells with me
the echo is,
FREEDOM
My mind has just gone off
to realize, I love who I am.
I'm free
so free.

-Griselda Estrada, Taos High School
(Rating: 7.20) Read Reviews of this Poem


Cloudy Days

Dark and sleepy,
The day goes by.
How drab is the day,
How dismal the sky.

The sun is overpowered,
By heavy clouds.
The gentle rays of warmth,
Are held back by leaden shrouds.

How I long for that bright orb,
The one they call the sun,
Till these raindrops exhaust themselves,
And the drizzly season is done.

Never before has the sky been so black,
Or the air so soggy.
Never have colors seemed so lost,
Or the heavens seemed so foggy.

I crave the warmth of the sun
And a radiance to touch the earth,
Clear waters to flow with ease,
Around a mountain's girth.

-Carly Moya, St. Pius X -Albuquerque
(Rating: 7.10) Read Reviews of this Poem


Flamenco Flambe

Each strum of strings
A new anticipation
Pulsates
I cannot grasp
The melody's movement
Through me
A sharp intake
Of breath
Music
Before it is taken away
With the next slap of rhythm
And I shudder
At the painful pleasure
All that the beat contains

-Lydia Lopez, St. Pius X -Albuquerque
(Rating: 7.00) Read Reviews of this Poem


Dance of Instruments

Memories of rain
Tapping upon the window.
Drip though my mind,
As the guitar gently weeps.
Sorrow filled violins
Whine about the sun concealing itself
Among the clouds,
While the pinging notes cry for a spring day.

Dissecting music into bars,
Individual wavelengths and frequencies of radio waves
Create the abc’s of life’s pleasures.
Electrons flow from the compounds that create our society
To the ears that the Brain
Perceives as a rejuvenation.

As if awakened by the
Leptons ringing in my ears,
I am aware that
Music sews itself into a body, mind and soul.
I am taken to a far place hidden within,
Independent upon its genera,
But dependent upon my perception.
Gentle precipitation on sweet fields of alfalfa
Dance in the wind
As a cello hums its voice.

-Karen Cotter, Socorro High School
(Rating: 7.00) Read Reviews of this Poem


Sweet Sensation

It is a language for only me to hear...
that he whispers in my ear
feels like soft, sweet kisses
warm...
and chilling

-Tara Ritchie, Taos High School
(Rating: 6.80) Read Reviews of this Poem


Black Blood, Crimson Flames

Black Blood, Crimson Flames

Black blood flowing from open wounds,
with crimson flames flickering to silenced tunes.
The dark blood dripping from silver blades,
the flames burning from warped, violent raids.
Children’s tears slashed from their faces,
demons arising from their hellish places.
That’s all I see, in my mind’s eye,
with my imagination, I can truly and freely fly.
Beyond the human comprehension,
I can release all my tension.
I am above what you will ever see,
as mystical and mysterious as an unused key.
You think you know me, yet you do not,
I will be the battle that will remain un-fought.
I close my eyes and what I realize,
won’t be accomplished by any tries.
So for your own sake,
Believe that my world is fake.
For you cannot follow my wild imagination,
I am more than just a creation.

Inspired by: “Raziel’s Theme Song” (Legacy of Kain: Soul Reaver

-Ellen Bone, San Jon High School
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Understanding

Why can't they just understand? Understand me, and lend out a helping hand. To show me that there are ways to ease the pain. To show me the strength and happiness to gain. To comfort my heart and stop the tears. To diminish my anger, and kill my fears. To understand me is to listen and see. My problems that have much power over me. Maybe I'm just too scared to face the consequences that I might pay, Maybe I'm just too afraid of trying to push them away.

-Vanissia Chavez, Ft. Wingate Bia School
(Rating: 6.50) Read Reviews of this Poem


Goodbye

Too sad to get angry
Too hurt to cry
I still can't figure out
What happened to us, the girl and the guy?
The pain is great
It's hardly worth bearing
We don't even talk
Feelings left without sharing
The air is thick with pain and sorrow
We won't be able to talk today or tomorrow
Lonely and weary without my friend
Why did this happen? Is it time for the end?
So many memories and so many tears
All gone to hell, replaced with my fears

Time to say goodbye for now

-Joshua Muehlenweg, St. Pius X -Albuquerque
(Rating: 6.50) Read Reviews of this Poem


Living in the Past

“Things aren’t the same
As they used to be.”

A quote from my grandma.

“People used to be
Honest,
Respectable,
And hard working.”

Sometimes,
It’s easy to agree,
But other times,
We have such opposing
Viewpoints.

It’s hard to listen
To somebody
Who doesn’t agree
With anything you say.

We can’t even
Watch TV together,
Because we don’t like
The same programs.

Even though
We disagree so much,
We still love each other
Unconditionally.

-Jennifer Wright, San Jon High School
(Rating: 6.50) Read Reviews of this Poem


Sounds of Chaos



A Storm of Music Fills the Air
Changing Tempos as if Changing Moods
A Chaotic Storm of Sound is Domineering
But a Calm Hides Within

A Crescendo of Sound Flows Through this Piece
Emotions Travel with it
Calm, Panic, Anger, Bewilderment
The Sounds of a Split Personality

A Voice Moves Within
Speaking in Tongues
Speaking of a Journey, a Triumph
A Hidden Voice Speaking of Its Travels
-JO-2001

-Jacob Ovrick, San Jon High School
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Fur Elise

Passion makes us desperate
Desperation makes us reach deep inside ourselves
The deeper we reach inside
The more we learn, and the more we are aware
About life, love and the common scheme of things we don’t identify with
I felt the magic of the composition seep into my soul
And I experienced a connection with the music
A special link that only I could perceive
The melody of the chords touched my heart
The fervor of the hauntingly beautiful notes
Seemed to surge through my bloodstream
I reflected on how the composer might have been feeling
And let his conformity merge with my own essence

Reminding me of how I am not always aware
Of how I should reach deep inside
And find the desperation to make me want to do so
For passion makes us desperate

-Crystal Terrell, San Jon High School
(Rating: 6.40) Read Reviews of this Poem


Visions

Simple pleasures in life,
Rain falling on your roof,
Holding someone you love close to you,
Calming lullabies,
Sung softly in your ear,
Ledgends and stories told of long ago,
Ancient history set before us,
To be examined and listened to,
All bringing visions to our minds,
Of things we've never dreamed of before.

-Katy Gordon, San Jon High School
(Rating: 6.20) Read Reviews of this Poem


When I Listen to Music

When I listen to music, it takes me into a world of dreams. A world nobody but me knows exists. Like an artist who has a vision, music fills me with thoughts and emotions it has a mind of its own. Music is like a boat on the sea or like a cloud of rain falling wherever it pleases. So when I listen to music, I go with the flow.

-C.J. Daye, Ft. Wingate Bia School
(Rating: 6.00) Read Reviews of this Poem


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