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The world around us is the ultimate source of inspiration. There is ever an abundance of material for the writer to glean. Please respond to one of the following with a poem.
  • Listen to a piece of instrumental music (no lyrics) and write a poem based on what you think the music is about or where it takes you. The music could be rock, jazz, classical, world, etc.

  • Look at a newspaper and use its contents-any or all of it, including stories, ads, layout, personals, classifieds, etc.-as your source of inspiration for a poem.

  • Ask an older person to tell you a story about his or her life. You might ask them to tell you about the time when they were your age. Or you might want them to tell you about something quite specific. Write a poem based on what they tell you.

Kyra's Poem

When you were my age
you saved the butter at your boarding school
and fed the chickens while your brother
learned theology
of course, you were the practical one
and ended up a chemical engineer

you tell me about oil
and the ranch and
the time you saved a horse from drowning
swam with it all the way around the bend in the river,
holding up his head.

I'm glad that we can email
and I write back with teenage dreams
you don't repeat your stories
and tell the ones my grandmother censors.
Fnally in the twilight of your life
I'm seeing the sunlight of your experiences.

-Kyra, Santa Fe Preparatory School
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Moments of Importance

Single white female seeking...
Someone. Someone
Who cherishes
that hour between waking and rising
the steady beat that the dryer makes
after you've turned it off
That stage before a marshmallow in
hot cocoa is unsalvagable,
But you can still pick it up with your fingertips
the awkward first kiss where you adjust
to new lips hoping you are doing everything right
Who can't help but smile
When a puppy yawns and shakes his head
When a baby burps and grins
When an elderly couple are still in love
After a lifetime in this world
I need someone to share
Those moments
And to be never and
Always changing

-Olivia, Santa Fe Preparatory School
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Untitled

My uncle lives in Questa, New Mexico.
The place is small, built of boards
and warm with simplicity.
He says the Indians called my father medicine
eagle. He says lizards live under us in long tunnels and you can hear them sometimes.
He says the pile of rocks in his yard used to be tools of ancient giants.
He told me that he and my father pointed loaded guns at eachother when they were kids.
His voice is high pitched because he has to roll a joint the night before so he can roll out of bed and live his life high.
His daughter goes to cambridge and his son is a firefighter.
He says he loves my father and told me how my father once had a girlfriend sit on his legs while he hung off the edge of a cliff and carved and eagle in the side of it.

-Dylan, Santa Fe Preparatory School
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Bicycle rodeo-o

furling, unfurling tents and bodies
swig of alcohol becomes rage in fire-eater's outtake breaths
camphor sweat ass smells assissinate olfactory
bending backwards my back pops
as I limbo with my cage as I dance pelvis interlocked with belly button
bending my body in half I am an arched bridge from forearm to metatarsal
offensive orange and silver duct tape
we give into we give into
the urge to be onstage and free
we see the buses and deranged boys and girls
and want to run away to the circus
and be ourselves finally!

and we'll be together so happy together
we'll be lost
lassoing horizon through vision of our audience
high on unity and harmony
high on orange and silver pierced septum
ghetto boots glasses and grey suit
pregnant flowing dress pyro hula hoops
baby blue cowboy who picks his nose
and holds my hand when we two-step

skinny guy drinking a paper sack ass crack beach ball braided beard beer gut snaggle toothed curled lip
pixie perfect tanned face clairol hair jean jacket
dances with her arms over her head swinging earth by its feet
slanted glasses loving the people loving the people loving the people with crazy hope-filled polka punches cross hatched chest hairs peek-a-boo bra strap
missle launcher mind

nice feet nice feet nice feet

nice Smile

-Daniel Ingroff, Taos High School
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Walking With Swimming Pool Shoes On

My great grandma
Wears swimming pool shoes
And anklet socks
From the summer
Into the winter
And she cuts her own hair
That she washes with Dial soap
She is spry and feisty
Her recurring words to me are:
"Mi jita,
Get your diploma
'Cause you're gonna need it!"
Which I acknoledge with a nod and a smile
Inwardly though,
Sirens go off inside my head
Diploma?
Does my grandma know that
I don't have the option
To ponder a diploma
I'm too concerned with "higher learning"
She tells me:
"Mi jita,
In those days my brothers and sisters
And I had to help on the ranch."
There was no time for school for her
She considered herself blessed
My great grandma is raw
She holds nothing back from me
Explaining to me why nowadays women shouldn't
Wear white wedding dresses
A candidness that makes me aware
Of the heat rising to my cheeks
But I extract from her
Seventy-five years
And fourth grade education
An appreciation for what it means to be
Genuine and fearless
To know, if I want
I too can walk about the world
With swimming pool shoes on.

-Amanda Navarro, St. Pius X -Albuquerque
(Rating: 9.90) Read Reviews of this Poem


Embrace

I saw a child once
As he played on the waiting room floor.
His hands were the blind man's cane,
His eyes the glutton's mouth--
Those insatiable, earthen eyes.
Between us an entire universe sprang forth.
Our souls were bare to one another
And content in their nakedness.
I stumbled down gullies of gold
Into caverns of consciousness
Where the only light shined from my face.
The earth was close and we embraced.

I saw my grandmother once
As she died on a hospital bed.
Her hands were a dying rose,
Her eyes were Sleep's first kiss--
Those deep pools of midday blue.
A cosmos of antiquity settled around me.
I was more than naked as her gaze
Trickled through me.
Rivers of radiance ran through the heavens
Raining indigo love onto celestial seas
That lapped at lucid shores.
The heavens were close and we embraced.

I sit alone now
Looking across my grandmother's face.
Love and learning are eternal twins
Echoing through her hollowed eyes.
And as Sleep sits beside me
To gently kiss my eyelids closed,
She sees my grandmother behind them.
As the timeless shores swell
She kneels close to a little boy and they embrace.


Inspired by "Asturias", written by Isaac Albeniz and performed by Marco Aurellio Gutierrez Mares on Guitarra Tres Simple.

-Brendan Shaughnessy, Onate High School
(Rating: 9.70) Read Reviews of this Poem


Mozart's Overture to the Magic Flute

Darkness
Silence, motionless silence,
And then from the belly of nothingness,
A sound.
A pulse emerges with bold welcome,
A blast of color and light.
This fragrant melody continues quietly,
Cautiously,
But with the same waving pulse.
Then, the music starts to skip, to race,
Faster and faster,
With a light bounce in its step
Like a child quivering with excitement.
Higher and higher this energy climbs,
Vibrant, sparkling, bursting at the seams
Until it can no longer contain itself, and
BOOM!
Light and life explode as though from the
Emptiness of the stage.
This song of adventure, of discovery,
Of love, of mystery,
Rich and warm with humming violins,
Deep oboes, flirtatious clarinets,
All intertwined in an elaborate dance.
Then this triumphal refrain returns
To fragile pulse,
Keeping an audience in anxious exhilaration,
Straining to hear the notes,
The crisp notes that fall from the instruments like leaves.
Ah, what rapture of the ear
And musical perfection
And the opera hasn't even started yet.

-Sara Litchfield, St. Pius X -Albuquerque
(Rating: 9.70) Read Reviews of this Poem


Meditation

Lapse into the soothing sound of the clarinet.
Hear its comforting notes, and know all is well with the world.
For you are lost in meditation.
A rhythmic meditation that can take you whereever you desire.
For this music is mixed with other instruments.

There is the synthetic orchestra
With its strings of harmony to guide you on your way.
There is the boom of the piano
With its basic notes alive and thrumming like a heart.
There is of course the deep melodic tone of the clarinet
Humming like a contented spirit,
Telling you that you’re in safe hands.

And then the music changes.
Hear the voices,
Not human voices, but sweet and ethereal
not of this world.
Synthetic like the orchestra, and wordless,
lovely waves of sound
Pass over your ears
For you are not hearing, you are part of this music,
within its crystalline depths, and in every pore of your body.
Hear and feel the clarinet and music mix
with the voices in a crescendo of sound.

And then the music closes.
The clarinet hums its last note
The strings play themselves into silence.
And the heart of the piano…
Stops
The song is over,
And all is well.


From “The Magical Elf Collection”

-Bruce Pfeiffer, Onate High School
(Rating: 9.60) Read Reviews of this Poem


Morning Sun: Bring the Halo

Winking tree light
Crash of day
Open sad eyes
Dingy world
Blankets of filmy dust
Angry paint splats on the wall
Look at the mess of rage
Lift the doll
From fire
See its pain
Memories of happy times
Imagination takes flight
Wind shares life
Waves of current
Take away ocean’s
Blackness
One single flashlight
Pinhole cutout
Run
Never reach the end
Stairs
Up down up
Fall
Stop
Turn back
Crawl to the bottom
Find the open valley
Eat the wild flowers
Sleep
Calm twinkles
Fireflies
Bring the halo
An old battle cry
Calling crickets
Off beat


Listening to “Appalachian Spring” by Aaron Copeland

-Kristin Morehead, Onate High School
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untitled

Crumpled newspapers lie on crumpled jazz
The beautiful single female seeking man of her dreams lays drenched in her spilt latte.
Let's talk, he says
It's been ages
I loved you so much it made me forget the crusades
And she sat smiling, grateful for the lie
She always did take life watered down.

-Claudia, Santa Fe Preparatory School
(Rating: 9.50) Read Reviews of this Poem


Untitled

A gentle slap, up against stone
It rises and falls.
A single crash along the shore
On the sand and down.
New ones come, larger, stronger
Bigger than before.
They crash, bellow, rock against the bay
Enduring longer.

It lulls, at last, It comes at end,
But I'll hear its greeting again.
The returning waves will soon be back,
Opened arms, my ears will welcome them.

(inspired by William Gillock's Seascape)

-Ted Lim, Las Cruces High School
(Rating: 9.40) Read Reviews of this Poem


Moonlight Sonata


Washing the quiet of the beach,
Waters carry with them
Remnants from the sea.
Particles,
Once somebody's loss,
Appear on the shores,
Forgotten by time,
Mixed with sand and stone.
Lost in the reflections
Of the waves,
Glass,cans,and cloth
Take their place.
Erased by the wind,
Safely buried,
Another's life is forgotten.


"Moonlight Sonata" 3rd Movement
Beethoven

-Sofia Marquez, Onate High School
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Will I Hear Him Coming?

Sleep has passed reality,
it hides like the moon
as clouds of thought
fill my room.

Shine dances in my open eyes
I wait anxiously for his arrival,
his return.
I pull the sheets up
above my collarbone.

I stare at the ceiling-
will I hear him coming?
I wrap the blankets
tightly around me.
My hair slips further
under my pillow.

Minutes creep past me,
but the hour never turns.
I am stuck in the lagging seconds
left to stuggle in twisted sheets.

Impatience drives my motion.
I rush from my bed
and find our prickly tower;
the tree of evergreen.
At its base stands the group
of accessorized boxes;
the milk and cookies are gone.



After reading articles pertaining to the coming of Christmas, from the Sun News.

-Sarah Brown, Onate High School
(Rating: 9.40) Read Reviews of this Poem


December 12, 1959

Cold seeps in through the rusty Buick
Stabbing knives piercing the bones of
the quivering children on the seats.
The night is velvety black around them;
somehow the the distant, burning stars
seem warmer than the glowing lights
of the bar.
Sh can hear her Daddy's laugh inside,
for he is warm, lusty, and glutted with the
bitter bourbon coating his mouth.
A nervous whimper from behind
impales her young flesh.
Even mother can't hear her feverish son cry,
florid skin hot with blazing sickness
as she leaves lipstick stains on a whiskey glass.

Her hands brush the steering wheel,
so empty without Daddy's powerful hands.
Leering drunks stagger from the rowdy box,
maudlin and fuzzy in the streetlights.
She locks the doors, trembling as they
stumble past the car.
The others cry softly like falling snow,
holding on to each other and curling up
on the leather seats, seemingly wet with
frigid air.
She breathes haltingly, fury circulating
through her blood. Fists curl and
she wants to scream.
But they will not hear her over the
wavering voice on the jukebox.

-Christi Stack, Las Cruces High School
(Rating: 9.20) Read Reviews of this Poem


the sound in your mind

A rumble of nonsense
The sound in my head
Deep feelings combined and red
Silly emotions
Unclear motives,
Jumping off buildings like playing a note
Lying in bed and telling a joke,
Adverse romance
Life in the FAST-TRACK
Buried in vibration
In a musical meditation
Constant lying
And they’re constantly trying
Religion and feeling
Love and true meaning
Balancing pain and comfort
Beautiful sine waves twisted with contort
This song is perfect with limited interaction
and music is, the perfect distraction





-Nicholas Angelo, Las Cruces High School
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Magic Ease

Nothing is held back as
The soloist laughs into his trumpet
Converting joy into boundless melody.
The Room is filled recklessly by his noise.

Drumsticks swing, approaching laziness
Disguising years of repetition and practice
Sharp contrast to the blurring fingers of the grinning pianist,
Whose black and white suit matches the keys

The music floats on deception
As all skill is covered up by ease
Only to be suddenly revealed.
A magician throwing off the cape.

-Loren, Santa Fe Preparatory School
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epitaph to her living body

once upon a time
there was you written in lines
i could describe the love of your eyes
define the pattern of your design
geometric, five side shape
infinite in each breath you take
pink luminous cracks purple and breaks

i don't see face in game played
box lets in no light
love plays sin
static in shade
head give light today
static in shade
twisting away

turn can't take and break
folded body pray
help me stay
face flat move
too stange for pain
talking crazy
he loves me needs me
baby don't fade
baby don't fade

hidden again
box lets no light in
head cupped
skin burn feet to belief
what the hell is happening to me
lifeless but light

water from head you're dead
wall
dirt bricks
feet on stone
crack in tone
loves and crumbles to hold
folds and waits
pink luminous cracks purple and breaks
body pray help me stay

feet uncovered through door
face flat move
lost inside
run to dark and hide
circular flow
too strange for pain
breath in strain
turn can't take and break
to flame uncontrolled
it's hold and wait
baby don't fade
baby don't fade

-mariko brown, Taos High School
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untitled

things are moving too fast around me
and time repeats itself
and time repeats itself
and i repeat myself
and i'm stuck in this wasteland
where words never enough
and i'm stuck
i tumble through the valley of the shadow of
life
where brick walls be my trees
and black smog be my clouds
and the weak still kick and scream
we will fight!!
and we'll fight

and we fight
but we swing in the wrong direction
the sun is in the east
things are moving too fast around me
time is a fully loaded 45 magnum
and the trigger's not on safety
the secrets of life
are hidden in the tip of my pen
but the secrets of the mind
are hidden in the depths of wisdom
and we must go deeper
than the surface of paper
to lay our own upon the lips of knowledge
the wind blows to us from the south
our shackles
and that song blows from the north
but we scream too loudly for help
HELP US!!!
and we can't hear our song
so we sing old slave hymns
and the secure watch us from their windows
as we strugle to move in the wrong direction
against their wind
and they tell us run
and if we gain too much momentum
they trip us
and we trip ourselves
and we trip each other
so in the end
the nazis are left standing
and we've condemned ourselves to holocaust
and we've condemned ourselves
to death by fire
and we've become nazis against each other
and we trip, and burn, and stab, and kill
and fuck over who ever we have to
we think that way
we'll win our metal
we think that way
we'll conquer the world
we think that way
we won't become one of them
one of us
one the slaves
one of the enslaved
one of the ignorant
we're ignorant
we've become ignorant
and we think we're free
they give us citizenship
and we think we're free
they've just disguised our cotton fields
as prisons
and our shackles
as police men
instead of pushing us
they tie our shoelaces together
and hold us down in the mud
when we've fallen on our faces
the hold us down in the mud
when we've fallen on our faces
but we try to get up by
digging in the wrong direction
we strangle each other to death
with that star-spangled banner

and it blows in the wind
and it's a symbol of freedom
but our hands and feet are tied
and it's a symbol of courage
but we hide behind our rage
and it's a symbol of rightiousness
but we kill each other for wealth
and it's a symbol of america
and it symbolizes americans
and it symbolizes us
and we symbolize each other
and we don't love each other
and we have to love each other
and we need to stop the rage
and we need to stop the rage
and we need to stop the rage

but i can't stop the rage
the rage is us
the rage is we
the rage is he, she, him, her, them
and it stands 12 billion legs strong
and it has 12 billion times the strength
of any of us alone
but it only has 6 billion minds
it only has one half the capacity for thought
that it has for destruction
it only has one half the capacity for thought
that it has for destruction
it only has one half the capacity for thought
that it has for destruction

and time keeps repeating itself
and i keep repeating myself
and things are moving too fast around me
and we're trying to catch the sun
but the sun is in the east
the sun is in the east
THE SUN IS IN THE FUCKING EAST!............
so why do we keep marching south

-zahra bilal, Taos High School
(Rating: 9.00) Read Reviews of this Poem


Breaking News

The tall, blatant, and dark letters
stood firm with the confidence of
steel across the top of the smooth
white newspaper. The letters spoke
the bitter truth of reality and came
together piercing the reader's eye:

SABOTAGE,
SAVAGE,
SCORCH,
and
SPITEFUL SECRETS!

The grandeur of the words darkened
and broke the once white and pure
newspaper. And even casted a speechless
shadow on the Sunday Comics leaving
Garfield's smile distorted.

-Michelle Mantegna, Las Cruces High School
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Untitled(Inspired by Beethoven's 9th Symphony)

We will put you away
You'd better start naming names
The mountains are gone the planes are back
Never look at it
Taken away in plastic bags to factory
One more and one more
I am not hearing this
Now everything is a headline
Baked up inside crockery
Grinning newscasters with sharp teeth
No eyes
Single lines mean everything
Paragraph or poem is trash
Bring me out into the sunlight
That's all I ask
You'll lose too in the end
Strapped in streets
With heavy boots around
One more that gets away
It doesn't happen
Paranoia is a friendly thing
When all is true and the walls
The walls can see you
Plug everyone in
Mass merchandise
Mass murder
Mass money


-Richard Harris, Las Cruces High School
(Rating: 8.80) Read Reviews of this Poem


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