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Round 2

Select and write a poem in response to one of the following:
  1. According to The New York Times (http://www.nytimes.com), 65% of the people in the Muslim world, in Pakistan, for example, are under the age of twenty. Write a poem from the perspective of young Afghan or Pakistani man or woman.

  2. Write a poem about someone who died in the World Trade Center on September 11. Your poem can be about a real person or one you imagine. Again, you might consult online information sources such as The New York Times.

  3. Write an ode to autumn. Be as specific as you can be in describing in detail what makes autumn so exquisite. And on one autumn day, September 11, to be exact, where were you when you heard about New York, the Pentagon, and the downed plane in Pennsylvania? Weave both elements, autumn and the September 11 tragedies, into your poem.

Eighty-seven Floors Up

I live in a 3x4 cubicle
The outside world is
A fantasy
In which I do not believe
This office devours time like
My daughter ate her fifth birthday cake-
Frosting on her cheek and crumbs in her hair

From eighty-seven floors up
The rest of New York seems
To be still- the people no longer move
In a colored swarm on the cold gray sidewalk

Up here, in my ceiling-less,
three-walled home,
I can't even see a window.
I see the painful, migraine glare of fluorescent lightbulbs
And the blue-green glow of computer screens
On gray-green faces.

I wonder how it could be,
That all of these distracted people
Could know me
As little as I know them.

I look to the picture frame
My daughter made
in her kindergarten class
Out of uncooked pasta
Where she grins at me.
The gap where her two front teeth used to be
Where now there is blackness.

-Olivia, Santa Fe Preparatory School
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age-old

you can never see the branches
through the mask of leaves
they glisten in the breeze
religous ecstasy
her hair fall down on me
skin cover human leaf

bare branch reach to my window
this pain is age-old
leaves fall in rays
loss of child
she sways wild
water deep
break from paralysis
peace
tree lays silent
silence
snake-coiled krater waits

wake
towers break
fall
this pain is age-old

fallen leaves from rooted tree
push forcible change on me
need explanation for rings
we circle in rings
shrinking from mother tree
unconscious acts poison vital necessity
we need connections to water deep
break from paralysis
peace

-Brown, Mariko, Taos High School
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Interruption

Walking forest
I stand still, lotus
Zephyr, tattoo skin,
Sun dipped tree fur
Crisp lips
Talking below my tattered shoes,
Earthbed quilt
Copper cork and mango thread
Weaving these leaves,
Low breath stream
Whisper...

Chemical vibration
Biology 101
Late for class
Intoxicated,
Radio static
911

Aspen dust make-up
spread blood with a butter knife
Bone branch
Willow limb
Skeleton

Life evaporates

-Angie Poynter, Taos High School
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Open Shut

Freon infest
We are the perfect insect
Don't give up on sex
I rip the photo of my face space
tape it back together
give as a belated valentine
Things don't always work out the way you might expect
I focus on not thinking
I try not to want the ideas on the tip of my tongue
try not to be the sponge of everything around me
try to be objective object
in this cell of barely breathable air
where I am forced to be human

But
I am missing the point
that masculinity in the magnanimous sense of the word is crystallized in dinosaur amber and embers of eyes on the ends of earth:
hunter gatherer father priest penis breath pither officer builder fixer candlestick dipper hopper bebop he doesn't stop her anymore

Today my world is a little mixed up
too many people have called my bluff
and I don't know how my cards will lay themselves out on this table made of fake wood molecules
so I lay on the linoleum puking battery acid until I burn myself a ticket to the center of everything-

Today the atmosphere is glass and all the astronauts are birds flying their shuttles into heaven's kitchen window falling into the ocean
stunned to say the least, all broken wings and brain damage.

-Daniel Ingroff, Taos High School
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Looking Out the Window for You

Did you know,
As I was driving to school that morning,
High strung and frustrated,
The only thing I could do was look
For a good radio station.
And you, I imagine you wondered,
"Will my overhead luggage fit,
Or am I going to have to check it in?"
Settling inside that lethal, metal can,
You thought,
"Damn, I got the middle seat
Instead of the window."
And the only thing
You immediately looked forward to was
Your "Twenty Years of the Temptations" CD.
It seems hardly worthwhile, maybe,
But the next time I'm driving to school,
I'll make sure to look out the window
For you.

-Amanda Navarro, St. Pius X -Albuquerque
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Ode to The Fall

Like leaves of trees
You tumbled in a wind
Down to the ground
In a flurry of flame
All in awe
Peaceful
Disastrous
Lain to rest
Crumbling hope
Beneath hate's feet
A breeze on the crisp autumn air
Chills the tears on my cheek

-Lydia Lopez, St. Pius X -Albuquerque
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The Prayer of an Afghan Teen

Allah, where are you now?
Do You not see the pain
Of Your people
And hear their constant song of sorrow,
Our prayer for assistance?
Our sad refrain hangs heavy over the sand,
The broken buildings,
But are You deaf to these sounds?
Do you not feel our constant hunger,
This burning emptiness
That drains our bodies and
Drags our spirits through the mud.
Our children and mothers wander the streets
In search of any meager morsel that even
A dog would think too small to eat,
And to this do You simply turn Your head?
What do You think of these gunmen
Who lurk through our villages
As pillars of destruction,
Claiming their loyalty to You.
This cannot be Your will.
Our holy veils have become death shrouds,
A prison of cloth that forces
Your women to beg under masks
In their tears and fears.
How can You turn Your back
When this foreign predator swoops
Over our land daily
Like famished vultures anticipating
To pick the meat from Afghanistan.
They say they do not desire
To hurt our people and only wish
To hunt the wolf pack,
But these monsters walk among us
In sheep's skin.
I lift my face to the heavens,
Nevertheless all I see are clouds of fire
And all I hear are the distant bombs.
We still believe and we still obey,
But I can feel my enemies
Breathing down my neck,
And where is my Protector now?

-Sara Litchfield, St. Pius X -Albuquerque
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To start to Fall

Outside the warm sun, cool air
rising light burgundy & crimson
Bomb! Stomach sinks to the bottom
of the ocean
while learning why the tide rises and falls

Leaves fall one by one
fire, sun, wind, water
New York's heart plummets

The fallen empire of a city
torch reflecting Liberty
goes down like the crash of
a 300 year dried up oak tree

Together, woodpecker and tree
Separation as a 30 year limb
of the dried up oak
begins to timber

After
leaves tremble slowly
to the ground
with no sound
The heartbeat stops

Firetrucks, police cars, taxis,
reporters, business people, homeless people,
the dawg that wawked dan the street
an' fell into a bucketta wata
Scattered...
ashes
all part of the debris now



-Tara Ritchie, Taos High School
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Missing You

Dark as night without a moon
dirty water in a pool
dying flower in my garden
death, in the valley of my hidden future.

Black spots in a white painting
thorns on roses
fires of hell, in heaven
dead birds, sing.

Our love will become a legend
our bodies will become dust,and,
i will never see you or feel you again.

I have learned to live without you
but i have not learn how to forget you.

-Griselda Estrada, Taos High School
(Rating: 9.60) Read Reviews of this Poem


arabic prayers

bismillah irahman irahim
kulhu Allah hu ahad
Allah hu sumad
lamyahlid wah lamyuhlad
wah lamyah kulahu kufu wan ahad
i pray
bismillah irahman irahim
i pray
bismillah irahman irahim
i pray in darkness
where bombs burst
on earths that tremble like her knees do
where "i" live
there's no life
and leaves upon leaves have fallen
collapsed on ashes
cover land mines
in minds
time is dangerous
seconds kept on leash
if she'll speak
we'll never know
they're gone today so maybe tomorrow
i am gone too
and i pray
kulhu Allah hu ahad
i pray
kulhu Allah hu ahad
i pray on hands and knees
in shadows where thoughts crouch
wind sweeps past graves
and dust from their deaths
is brought to thought again
under closed hands
"a mind is a dangerous thing"
if i could i'd sprout wings
and just fly
past heavens and skies
i'd fly
chained to surfaces
over graves
and land mines
i'm stuck
so i pray
bismillah irahman irahim
kulhu Allah hu ahad
Allah hu sumad
lamyahlid wah lamyuhlad
lamyah kula hu kufu wan ahud

-zahra bilal, Taos High School
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Untitled

Falling leaves and falling towers
summer ended fast this year
and I stopped to notice the colors on the trees outside my window
and the way the horses' feet crunched in the fallen gold.

It hasn't snowed yet although the teasing clouds
look pregnant as they recede onto the other side
of the mountain.
In New York my sister asks for her winter clothes and sends pictures
of herself and her friends looking glamorous and intimidating.
I wonder what we'll talk about at Christmas.

The stars seem clearer this year or maybe
gratitude is a lens that gilds the ordinary so we remember to pause while
we can and
notice the changing seasons.

-Kyra, Santa Fe Preparatory School
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Untitled

On the upper floors the paperwork is spreading into chaos
The smoke burns my lungs
After most of us have come to some state of acceptance we sit under desks,
clinging to eachother's sweaty hands.
Some try to find shelter or some way out
I decide that I want to be happy when I die
and the clouds of ash and cremation that rise from the footsteps
of the firefighters don't bother me
Blame is no longer in me and I hope that some father
in some country will not have to watch bombs drop in the distance
helpless and isolated from the workings of the world
I watch a couple smash a window with an office chair
They embrace then run holding hands
It would be nice to get away from the smoke
The grip of my hand tightens

-Dylan, Santa Fe Preparatory School
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Every night he would sit in his apartment,
Lonely, waiting to change.
The staticky glow of the tv
Flashing blue on his face.

Every day he would sit in his office,
Mindlessly working, not living.
His desk was clean, ordered.
A model to his less organized co-workers.

Everything changed insidiously
The tv sits, darkly unwatched.
The desk remnants will never motivate.
Now he has nothing to wait for.

-Loren, Santa Fe Preparatory School
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Another Memory

In New Mexico,
between grey walls, classmates
Whisper as I pass
glass doors; useless talk.
Topics plunge into muddy water;
The pool of conversation.
'They collapsed'
It echoes, devoid of meaning.

* * *

In New York,
between grey skyscrapers and streets,
A girl plunges through the sea
of newly pressed suits
and looks over her shoulder.
Her sister's hazel eyes
burn with curiosity for
a world so fresh to her.
Her yellow-orange hair
turns in greeting,
a smile on her soft skin.
They push the crosswalk button.

* * *

A familiar sound in the busy school
Lockers open and shut,
closed tight by the mouths
of metal locks.
More useless pools of speech
seep into one another,
all indistinguishable.
Our hopes of morning
doused as the bell chimes
class time.

* * *

Glass chimes as it
sporadically hits the ground
as manufactured weather.
Hearts pound as the sisters run,
their hands tightly clasped.

* * *

I look at my TV screen
explosive power revealed
on the many colored pixels.
Debris tumbles in a
blanket of death,
Images dance vividly.
Just another ripple in
the quiet pond of life.
It creates another memory.

* * *

The end of their beginning,
another cloud descending
to carry them; to cross over,
fire in the soul extinguished.
Will I remember her?
Her life becomes a memory
another memory.

-Sarah Brown, Onate High School
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Going to War and Back

Men packing up
leaving wives and children behind with heartaches
to become soldiers
holding their children
to wielding huge guns
going to football games
to going through training
watching boxing in their living rooms
to fighting for their country
running for fun
to running for their lives
winning a bet
to bringing victory to our state
living through hell
to reuniting with their families.

-Leatrice Whitegoat, Ft. Wingate Bia School
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American Debris

I step past a fast food joint
Across the street from a Masjide, a place of worship.
Enticing, meaty odors waft out of the store and
Blend with the smoky smell of the street.
A high pitched horn honks
As my friend hollers, "Hello!" and waves.
The sidewalk seems to hum through me.
The song is ancient.

I confront a burnt out building,
Broken and blackened.
The hollowed building stands
As a monolith to the thousand hands over our mouths.
Before the building lies a man,
Broken and bloodied,
His eyes wide in fear, but empty in death.
He is the harbinger of a voice that needs no mouth.
A coronach penetrates the debris.
His song is ancient.

-Brendan Shaughnessy, Onate High School
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Liberty's Torch

I stand tall with my head held high,
holding an eternal flame which represents
everything that is cherished.

On September 11th my flame flickered and began to dim.
My heart skipped a beat and
tears trickled down my face.

I lowered my torch close to my heart
in a maternal embrace.
I stand steady for a moment.
I wipe the tears from my eyes and
raise my torch up high.
I stand with determination while my
torch emits a new faith.

-Shireen, Santa Fe Preparatory School
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Untitled

Tattered flags
and God Bless Americas
seemed too far away to worry about
So I stayed silent
Trying to blend into the tears
It seemed a good day for bad emotions
but mine were so different
and not even the comfort of fall
could make it all go away.
Nothing could hide my red from the blackness of the crowd.
Like an autumn leaf blown straight into the dead of winter.
Red from greed
And red from the pain of something that hurt so much more
Than the thought of that dusty city,
Miles and miles away

-Claudia, Santa Fe Preparatory School
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Lost Lives

One life becoming the forgotten dead
in the broken Towers in New York.

A person's life, buried twelve feet under
the Towers, the house of undefined lives.

Lost loved ones, killed by troubled men,
they died with thier heads held high,
reaching for the sky.

The Twin Towers, becoming a graveyard
to unfound bodies,
killed by cowardly terrorists.

The Gates to Heaven open to mournful souls.

God's hand pats the shoulders of the heroes
who saved some lives, and the rest,
who weren't saved, lie in the hands of the
Savior.

As we keep our hopes up, we share the sorrows
with the ones who lost their loved ones.

-Garrett Shije, Bernalillo High School
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untitled

Yesterday things changed, a big bang over smokey skies, many souls lost over bloody cries.
My dreams feel shattered, and my tears were shed, while my night was long lying, tossing, turning in my bed.
Yesterday things changed and my hopes were killed, while my heart lay tattered and my fears revealed, my country lay in pieces while other paraded around, while others cheered and laughed thinking they're heaven bound, among the many lost, are so many who lay torn, my country lay in pieces, the rest left to mourn.
Yesterday things changed in my little world, so big.
Yesterday things changed, but I must go on an live.

-nicole garcia, Bernalillo High School
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